Hello all bloggers,
today I did one of my holiday activities and it was to make a fish on google drawn and I did shapes after shapes until it came up like a fish and I added more details and more colors and I was proud what I did and then after I did my fish I what to my class website and I scroll down to were it say class blog and I click on it and I what to my blog and press it and on the top right corner it say new post and I click on it and I wrote what about the fish that I was making.
Ka pai Kennedy. I like how fish, especially how you have flipped some of them round to face the other way. So what tips did you learn about Google Drawing during this activity? Did you catch the part of the video when Mr Goodwin shows you how to get rid of your black outlines? Or have you chosen to keep them in?
ReplyDeletethank you for that comment I will try next time.
DeleteHi Kennedy. I think your fish look great. I really like how you've flipped them and changed the sizes. I also like the little smiley face. It looks like another fish much further away. Remember to check your writing carefully before posting. I find reading it aloud helps me to check my work.......Ms C
ReplyDeleteKia ora Kennedy,
ReplyDeletePaterson Class have been checking out your blog. We really like your google drawing of the fish. We like that you used different shapes and sizes. We thought it was very creative, especially the bubbles and the details that you included. Next time you blog it would be a good idea to read your work to check and edit any mistakes. We found it a little bit tricky to read because there were no full stops.
Hey Kennedy
ReplyDeleteI really like the creativity of your blog post. It looks great. I like all the specific details and things. Maybe next time you should look through your writing and check if the punctuation is in the places that it should be in.
Have a Great day!
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_Asamah